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Thursday, March 31, 2011

Messy Room by Shel Silverstein

Whosever room this is should be ashamed!
His underwear is hanging on the lamp.
His raincoat is there in the overstuffed chair,
And the chair is becoming quite mucky and damp.
His workbook is wedged in the window,
His sweater's been thrown on the floor.
His scarf and one ski are beneath the TV,
And his pants have been carelessly hung on the door.
His books are all jammed in the closet,
His vest has been left in the hall.
A lizard named Ed is asleep in his bed,
And his smelly old sock has been stuck to the wall.
Whosever room this is should be ashamed!
Donald or Robert or Willie or--
Huh? You say it's mine? Oh, dear,
I knew it looked familiar!

by Shel Silverstein

Review:
This sounds alot like my room at the moment. ^_^

Not my room, but similar!! ^_^
Word of the day:

bivouac

\ BIV-wak, BIV-uh-wak \  , noun;
1.
An encampment for the night, usually under little or no shelter.


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18 comments:

  1. Lol, that takes me back. And for two reasons. I went through a SS obsession in High School, and yeah, that was my dorm in college. An accidental homage? Maybe...

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  2. i couldnt help but laugh reading this poem because my room is in shambles right now. great desciptive approach to poetry

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  3. wow definitely sounds like my room

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  4. Sounds like my room a few months ago. I've been doing a good job of keeping it clean lately :)

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  5. my room is just as bad as yours

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  6. i want to bivouac the night away, i am doing it right?

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  7. My room used to be really clean...until life started intervening and I stopped caring about socks on the floor, dust, etc... =/

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  8. Get to cleaning that room! LOL j/k

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  9. Your words game me a nice visual. The picture brought everything together.

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  10. YOu really are an incredible writer, or whoever wrote this is. keep it up.

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