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Wednesday, December 22, 2010

sweet sunshine song by Kailyn Coleman




sweet sunshine song : Kailyn Coleman
and id write you a song, oh darling, but i bet its all been written, once before. cuz i am not originality, i am just a pen, paper, and ears for listening. and my skin, it shivers, at the taste, touch, the look of your body. and this inspiration in my brain, is a tune that sings sweetly in my ear, that influence these winds, in this, full empty room, to twist and consume. i told you once before, in my sleep, its your promises, that were lies, that hold me prisoner here. the water tastes dry, and the lights have grown, more and more dull, while this years spring, looks alot like last years fall. when the sun went out, and then bursted aloud, "im shining so bright yet, you still can not see me!" i smiled til i realized, i was miles into the sky, looking down at myself, and couldnt help but cry. but the tears froze somewhere, halfway between my face, and miles below me, and turned into that same tune, i had heard once before, singing sweeter, than i had heard it sung before


23 comments:

  1. Another great selection. Thank you again for taking time to post these.

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  2. Was that the original format of the poem. In a paragraph like that?

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  3. Man, thats great! Could use some formatting between stanzas maybe

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  4. I think it has formatting, maybe i should ask her to send me the formatted version.

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  5. formatted would definitely be better. it's rather hard to follow as of now.

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  6. formatted would definitely be better. it's hard to follow as of now.

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  7. Is it a french song? It reads like a french translation to me, very nice.

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  8. Because of the formatting I read it in a babbling valley-girl accent. Like finger-nails on a chalk-board.

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  9. :3 almost made me cry. jk :D good song though :)

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  10. loved it - keep them coming

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