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Wednesday, December 22, 2010
sweet sunshine song by Kailyn Coleman
sweet sunshine song : Kailyn Coleman
and id write you a song, oh darling, but i bet its all been written, once before. cuz i am not originality, i am just a pen, paper, and ears for listening. and my skin, it shivers, at the taste, touch, the look of your body. and this inspiration in my brain, is a tune that sings sweetly in my ear, that influence these winds, in this, full empty room, to twist and consume. i told you once before, in my sleep, its your promises, that were lies, that hold me prisoner here. the water tastes dry, and the lights have grown, more and more dull, while this years spring, looks alot like last years fall. when the sun went out, and then bursted aloud, "im shining so bright yet, you still can not see me!" i smiled til i realized, i was miles into the sky, looking down at myself, and couldnt help but cry. but the tears froze somewhere, halfway between my face, and miles below me, and turned into that same tune, i had heard once before, singing sweeter, than i had heard it sung before
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Another great selection. Thank you again for taking time to post these.
ReplyDeletedas gut my friend
ReplyDeletewonderful! i love this!
ReplyDeleteWas that the original format of the poem. In a paragraph like that?
ReplyDeleteMan, thats great! Could use some formatting between stanzas maybe
ReplyDeleteIt was alright, thank you.
ReplyDeletevery good...
ReplyDeletebeautiful beautiful words
ReplyDeletei really do like it =)
ReplyDeleteI think it has formatting, maybe i should ask her to send me the formatted version.
ReplyDeleteformatted would definitely be better. it's rather hard to follow as of now.
ReplyDeleteformatted would definitely be better. it's hard to follow as of now.
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteIs it a french song? It reads like a french translation to me, very nice.
ReplyDeleteBecause of the formatting I read it in a babbling valley-girl accent. Like finger-nails on a chalk-board.
ReplyDeleteThat's looks like a nice song. :)
ReplyDelete:3 almost made me cry. jk :D good song though :)
ReplyDeletevery beautiful.
ReplyDeleteamazing! really beautifull!
ReplyDeletekiss
That's nice. Keep them coming.
ReplyDeleteshort n sweet, love it
ReplyDeletelovely words!
ReplyDelete<3 kris&kel
www.krisandkel.com
loved it - keep them coming
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